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My Diagnosis of an E-mail Marketing Attempt

My Diagnosis of an E-mail Marketing Attempt


I generally despise e-mail advertising, but if that’s true, why the heck did I read this entire e-mail marketing message addressed to me? I know I’m particularly difficult to market to. I’m in marketing and sales so I’m more likely to diagnose your process than pay attention to what you are trying to sell to me.

So here is my diagnosis:

A) My name was in the e-mail subject. I shouldn’t have fallen for it, but I, like others like to see my name whether it is in lights or apparently in an e-mail message.

B) This came from a real person. If I wanted to e-mail Ashley Hira back at Hiras Tailors I could, and by the way, her name is the name of the business, so now I feel like this “business owner” cares enough to send me a personal message even though I know that this was done through some e-mail program.

C) It was something specific to the area I live in and mentioned specific places that know. I felt like the person was speaking directly to me because of the area mentioned.

If I was in the market right now for a new suit, you bet I would be going to this event. I’m not sure what the whole horsehair barrister reference is about, so maybe their marketing message was a little off, but all in all, well done.

These tips and diagnosis can help you successfully market your business, since so much of what we do is sending communications through e-mail, deploy some of these tips to make your campaigns more successful. Here’s a copy of the e-mail I received below.

“From: Ashley Hira
Sent: Wednesday, September 28, 2011 7:22 AM
To: Apryl Hanson
Subject: Message for Apryl Hanson

HONG KONG TAILORS NOW VISITING SACRAMENTO – 29th Sept to 1st Oct
(& We also visit throughout the U.S)

Dear Ms. Hanson,We are a family owned Bespoke Custom Tailors & Legal Outfitter based in London & Hong Kong now visiting Sacramento. We are renowned for our handmade suits, shirts, jackets, coats, dress suits and trousers for men and women. All our garments are hand cut and handmade precisely for your size and shape and taste.

As well, we regularly visit all major cities of the USA. Please click here for our full list of cities we visit.

Our specialist tailor, Ramesh Hira is showcasing our services in:

Sacramento from Thursday 29th to Saturday 1st October 2011 at the Sheraton Grand Sacramento Hotel, located at 1230 J Street 13th and J Street, Sacramento 95814.

Our prices are very reasonable with suits from US$549, handmade shirts from $75, top coats from $549, tuxedos from $549 and sports jackets from $399. Price depends on the fabric chosen, and we carry a huge selection of over 3000 cloths to choose from, including European designer cloths such as Dormeuil, Wain Shiell, Scabal, Zegna and more. All items are individually hand cut and handmade precisely for you, and with excellent finishing details.

We also have a few Special Packages available at the moment, such as 2 suits & 2 shirts for $1499, 3 suits, 5 shirts for $2199, shirts package and winter wardrobe package (please click here to see a PDF with more offers).

Hira’s Fashion was established in London & Hong Kong in 1960. We are specialists in fitting Barristers & Solicitors in all commonwealth legal communities throughout the world and are one of only 2 companies worldwide that make horsehair barrister wigs, robes and judicial regalia.

To book an appointment, please reply to this e-mail or give Ramesh a call at (310) 989-9300.

Further information can be found on our website: www.hirastailors.com

As well if you wish to be informed about our other city or country schedules, please do let me know.

Best Regards,

Ashley Hira
Marketing Manager
Hiras Fashion International.”

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